Hi Eric, Good to see this on the blog. I have a question about the illustration in the 1st spread "the issue". The car with the bike on back is still one of the problems because it's driving. This is confusing -- even if the car's driver plans to bike at some point in the future. What do you think?
My thoughts were to put a bunch of cars in parking spots showing how much room cars take up and throwing a bike in the picture is the same concept I am using for the poster. "Look how little room the bike takes up." It also shows another issue of people owning bikes, but not using them.
About the cover: Do you need the little horizontal bar at the base of the bike rack? I noticed the ones on campus look like they go into the group. This little line seems to stop the movement of the curvy rack which works as an illustration and as a graphic. I'd get rid of it.
Hi Eric, Good to see this on the blog.
ReplyDeleteI have a question about the illustration in the 1st spread "the issue". The car with the bike on back is still one of the problems because it's driving. This is confusing -- even if the car's driver plans to bike at some point in the future.
What do you think?
My thoughts were to put a bunch of cars in parking spots showing how much room cars take up and throwing a bike in the picture is the same concept I am using for the poster. "Look how little room the bike takes up." It also shows another issue of people owning bikes, but not using them.
ReplyDeleteAbout the cover: Do you need the little horizontal bar at the base of the bike rack? I noticed the ones on campus look like they go into the group. This little line seems to stop the movement of the curvy rack which works as an illustration and as a graphic. I'd get rid of it.
ReplyDeleteI meant -- into the ground.
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